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I’m working on a History exercise and need support.
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Prose, including spelling, grammar, usage, style and punctuation; Is the prose polished and professional ? |
Comments Overall, good work, with some errors here and there. |
8 / 10 pts |
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Format, including pagination, margins, bib. entries, footnotes, subheadings; Is the format clear, correct and easy to follow? |
Comments One are to improve is to add more footnotes / citations to show where you are getting your information. Without footnotes, you are not in compliance with the principles of academic integrity |
7 / 10 pts |
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Argumentation and evidence; Does this essay go beyond summary and book report? Does the paper have a thesis / interpretation? Does the author present a debatable assertion and use evidence from sources to support the thesis? |
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11 / 15 pts |
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Historical information mastery; does the author accurately and reliably explain the topic in historical context? Does the author show significant research beyond the encyclopedia and textbook? |
Comments Overall, you provide a lot of information about the Han; good work; now try to add primary sources, such as the Discourses on Salt and Iron to provide more depth to what your write. |
13 / 15 pts |
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