I have started the assignment but not completed. I would like you to review and revise the paper.
I have selected my mother and discussion regarding healthy meal kits company. I do recommend the attribution as follow:
– Include a free service for older people who are above 65 years old, where the company comes in quarter basis and check their wight and health condition and recommend the meals accordingly
– include this service whoever has continues 4 months subscriiption, in order to retain them
– I thought also for cards and messages from the heath assistance and see other attribution to include as they limited into two or more.
also include some pictures and graphics.
I have attached my first draft work along with the paper instruction.